
The wonder of a sleeping park, enveloped in the mist
Where space and time and matter amorphously exist
The air has slowed to a halt and rests without a stir
The trees have ceased their shimmying and quietly concur
Disembodied voices, the barking of a dog
Softened by the dampened air, a muffler of fog
Scatterings of waterfowl upon the static lake
Blend into the vista, increasingly opaque
In this softly grounded cloud, little can be known
A perfect day for wandering, your worries to disown
To leave them unattended as you slip away
To blissful anonymity amid the milky grey
Trust the paths and inclines, reminding you of place
Taste a more immediate relationship to space
Hear your feet beneath you, this moment keenly felt
Soft anticipations as time begins to melt
Oak and Rhododendron, sycamore and rose
Looming on the fringes in vaporous repose
Receding into nothing – a powder cloud of peace
Dissolving all insistence, a cognitive release
Figures on the footpath, emerging from the sky
Coming into focus and gently passing by
Cushioned from perspective, discovering the way
You lose yourself discreetly and find yourself again
Copyright Tom George 2024
The title is a reference to a celebrated work of Christian mysticism, dating from the 14th century. The Cloud of Unknowing is an anonymous work, and has parallels with other spiritual traditions including Buddhism.
I haven’t read it yet but I will!

Hi Tom,
thanks for this wonderful piece of poetry. How wonderful it is to be alive and to enjoy all this beauty…
Hug from Vienna,
Nadia:)
Thank you Nadia! Hope you have some nice mist sometimes in Vienna 🙂 Best wishes, Tom
So beautifully evocative of those early morning mists in parks and woodland.